>>702
そうだったんですか☆
すっきりしました！
ありがとうございます^＾

>>703

boy know I'm crazy over you

直訳すると男の子は私があなたにゾッコンなのを知ってるになりますよねー、
みんな私があなたを好きなことはバレてるとかになるのかな？
前後の文脈と比較して訳してみてください

primal≒famous

って言えます？

今までのあなたの人生の中で最もexcitingだったことかsadだったことを書きなさい。

I had been learned playing the piano.
When I was a elementary school's children,I appeared on a piano competition with my sister.
I was very nervous at that time,but my sister encouraged me.
So we could enjoy playing the piano,and we could have very nice perfomance.
In addition,to be surprised,we got first prize in the competition.
I was very exciting,and tears ran down my face.
It became most exciting event in my life.

この英作文の添削してほしいです＞＜！

I was very excitingよくない
children よりstudentの方がいい気がする。主語がIだからchildだし

Iだからexcitedでしたね;;
studentになおします☆
ありがとうございます！

そこのschool'sの'sいらない 無生物に'sは英作ではやめておけ

英単語はどうしたら覚えられますか？

>>707
>>I had been learned playing the piano
これは時制どうなってるの？？
どういう意図でhad been learned?

>>It became most exciting event
これは現在も続いてるんだから
It had becomeかIt isのほうがいいんじゃないかな。

全体的に雰囲気としては悪くないけどもうちょっと時制とか単語の使いまわしに気をつけたほうがいいかなー。


ちょっと直してみた。
I've learned playing the piano for a long time.
When I was in elementary school, I and my sister had a piano competition.
I was really nervous at that time, but my sister encouraged me.
Thanks to her, I could enjoy playing the piano, and we could play very well.
In addition, to be surprised, we got a first prize in the competition.
I was very excited.
Because of the happiness, tears dropped down naturally.
That's the most exciting experience I've ever had.



最近文法勉強してないから間違ってたらごめんね。

I had been learned I had been learningじゃないかな？
更にもし今も続けてるなら、had→have になるよ☆

あと、 In addition to be surprisedはIn addition surprisinglyの方がいいかな？